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Starvation for Beginnersstill don't KNOW what you're waiting ON      you have MISSED the PENTECOST happy haunted COME and GONE      whose innoCENCE was NEVER LOST

          don't chew don't swallow            DON'T CHEW DON'T SWALLOW
i've been cursed i've been PRAISED    i've been famished it all FEELS THE SAME
               so       Starvation for Beginners
by ~ConcreteDreamer

i remember tomorowI remember a time…
           I was walkin’ through Carver
              it was rain’n             my thoughts were all retarded             I was talkin’ all insane and…
.I remember a time when I woke up and stopped complainin’.
Remember talks of a truce or a change or an arraignment
     i remember tomorow
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Believeri was in
DEEP s p a c e with hopes thinner than J-papers ,,was on the cusp of black holes where I FOUND god & Believer
by ~ConcreteDreamer

No angel the only thing that seemed more real than her eyes in the sunlight,, was the sunlight in her eyes under moons and dark skies on nights when i’d wondered.. exactly how it was that she kept her wings covered and why those feet graced the earth when she could have just hovered
nights when i lost faith in angels knowing no one was above her.. No angel
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Sat Oct 11, 2008, 2:30 PM

Listening to: Red Sparowes
Reading: Lords of Chaos
Watching: some really wierd shit
Playing: catch up
Eating: better than ever
Drinking: enough to kill a man

SO i haven't even looked at this place in almost two years, havent really written alot either...i will soon though if i find time between culinary school and work and hanging out...i'm kinda off drugs which is kinda a good thing... new shit should be up soon

LOVE

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Current Residence: Richmond, VA
Interests: Dreaming (while asleep or awake)
Favourite movie: Watch
Favourite genre of music: Intelligent hip-hop/turntableism, Post metal, stoner metal
Favourite poet or writer: hubert shelby jr, philip K dick
Operating System: insomnia
MP3 player of choice: stolen ones
Wallpaper of choice: anyone thats fun to rip down
Skin of choice: vaginal
Favourite game: russian roullete, hungry hungry hippos
Favourite gaming platform: ps3
Favourite cartoon character: the punisher
Personal Quote: all i ever wanted was to pick apart the day, put the pieces back together my way - AESOP ROCK
Tools of the Trade: Microsoft fukkin word, an occasional pen and pad & lots of stimulants

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~deathforgets Feb 27, 2007, 5:48:50 PM

Thank you most kindly good sir, for the

. I am truly honored

~Deathstarr Aug 24, 2006, 12:23:16 PM

hey you---
for some odd reason my DA was being difficult and wouldnt let me post a comment on your newest work. so here it is: i loved it (no surprise!), especially the part about the bleach blonde with a tight |box| .
[mad

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the sun in the trees made the skyline look like crooked teeth.

~countthescars Jun 25, 2006, 1:27:29 PM

mate, just checked out some of your work after getting your comment (i haven't checked this place for far too long) and i may just return the favour and watch you because i really like your style of writing. sorry for not getting back to you sooner!

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- it's to dying in another's arms and why i had to try it -

~lotuskid Jun 19, 2006, 8:07:08 PM

man... what a wierd find.... I was browsing poetry and found your sabbatical decision.... very nice piece btw... and i was blown away by the similarities of our profiles... and just in case you haven't heard em you should check out the prefuse 73 : Vocal Studies and Uprock Narratives and DJ Shadow : Endtroducing....

anyway... I'm adding to faves so i can check the rest of your writings out later.... peace

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saliva always tastes
different depending on who's
mouth it comes from - Lotuskid

Though you hold me still,
I shudder like the thunderstorm— Miseria-Cantare

~ConcreteDreamer Jun 20, 2006, 10:47:16 PM

yo of course i know prefuse 73, and DJ Shadow is str8 up ill, the whle dark jungle was and still is head of its time... if ur that similar to me tho check out SLOW SUICIDE STIMULUS and you'll be happily suprised...good to see someone one here thats not some whiny pre-teen fuck with a coupledeeps words to spill into text... keep it legit man...do your thing..peace peace...embrace infinity...ONE

~lotuskid Jun 21, 2006, 1:38:10 PM

haha will do will do... yea I'm tired of all this pity me prattle thats pours unbidden from the minds of these pretentious little punks.. I swear if i read another I cut myself cause he/she dumped me and i laughed/cried as I bled my tears for him/her I'm gunna fuckin flip... Honestly I've been there done that and actually gotten a t shirt... but that was never my shtick and I cant believe how people would actually wanna play that role... bah, ranting... will check out stimulus though... keep up the good vibes....

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saliva always tastes
different depending on who's
mouth it comes from - Lotuskid

Though you hold me still,
I shudder like the thunderstorm— Miseria-Cantare

~BulletProofPrincess May 20, 2006, 11:11:41 AM

Haha. I absolutely love the fact that you said check out my "shit". But yeah anyways I really do appreciate you
reading my poetry. And I would love to hear critique on
any since you did say I did over did some of my poetry.
And I won't jump your throat if you do elaborate on that.
Like some people would. Lol. By the way Aesop Rock is
awesome. It's one Hip Hop music I like. Lol. Once I made
a cd of hip hop that I liked for my friend because she likes
alot of mainstream rap or whatever. And she didn't like them.
She said they were "different".
Well Take Care.
Bye.
<3

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